Semester Deux, Blog Six

http://aclarkf.blogspot.com/
What I liked about Alex's pitches is that she says that she would go back and talk to her mentor again to add more things to her mentor interview which is what she plans on using for her ampersand article. I also liked the creativity she used when talking about perspectives and comparisons. The last one was pretty general, but I liked how she said that she would like to write about what the kids taught her. I hadn't thought of that before and I think it is an interesting idea.

http://noahshumanitiesblog.blogspot.com/
I liked this one because it had the same idea I had. I wanted to focus on something that I have already talked about in a past internship assignment. I was not too crazy about his second pitch, but I liked how he said that his previous pitch would be like cheated which also made me want to do something different in my other article. This will make the new article unique and informative in a new and creative way. I also like how he wants to use his mentor interview, because that is also something I wanted to do. Although, my mentor interview is a bit long and it jumps around different topics, I would like for it to be told.

http://ericaboodlesness.blogspot.com/
Well, I liked how her pitches were unique and if I were to read this ampersand article I would have a better idea of what this person's experience was like and be able to compare it to my own experience. I knew got an idea of what her internship was right off the bat and I was mainly interested in her topic. This would lead to a great article because it would be detailed and descriptive.